Tuesday, September 09, 2008

Zephyra

Zephyra! Oh my Zephyra!

Can't tell you what it took to reach here.
It was a tiny two page story based on a fancy I had two years back and now it blew up into huge story. Never wrote a story this big till date. And I am afraid I might have dragged a little too much and made the story boring. But, honestly, most of it is patched up from bouts of spontaneity. I have put the entire story in one page.

http://shortnovelzephyra.blogspot.com/

In the end the only chapter I liked in the novel is the chapter titled Vanitha. But please be generous with your comments, suggestions and complaints. It probably needs more editing, especially because I have totally screwed up the tenses. But I am tired now. Some other time, perhaps.

nja,
Jade

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